The War story......

As mom and i are standing there Dad gets lines to go and fight in WW1, i don’t want him to go i am so scared that he will never come back. I look into Mom’s eyes i can see her eyes starting to swell up with tears i don’t like to see Mom upset, then i look over to Dad he looks back at me i can see the tears running down his face.

I let go of Mom's hand and run to Dad i give him a massive hug. I started to feel the the trickle of tears running down my face, i loved him i did not ever want to let him go because i did not know if he would come back or not. “Dad don’t go” i cried then he said “I promise i will come back i love you and your Mom forever”. I grabbed Dad  as tight as i could and i would not let him go. Mom came over to get me she gave Dad a Kiss for good luck and said”Come back we will need you and we will miss you so”. We waited for the soldier’s get on the Trains then we watched them leave the station. From 1914-18 we waited for him to come home then one day we were eating tea and then we heard the door open and slam we went to have a look it was Dad, Mom ran and gave him a massive hug and kiss then i gave him a hug he said to me “wow you have gotten so big son i have missed you so much”. From that day on we lived happy ever after.

By Mekeisha Hurley.

Mekeisha and Abigail's Do's and Don't's

                                         

Do-stand tall for your self and others.

Don't-bully others.

Do-be kind to people that are older than you.

Don't-talk in church.

Don't-hurt others.

Do-Be good in the public eye.

Do-listen to people that are older than you.

Don't-be silly round little kids.

Don't -disrespect yourself and others.

Do- help everyone even if they aren't your best friend.

Don't- be silly in prayer time and church.

Do- be kind to everyone .

Don't- put yourself or others down.

Don't - think your opinion doesn't matter.

Do- believe in yourself and others.

Do- open doors for people who are older than you.be nice.

Don’t- swear in school

By Abigail and Mekeisha :)

using personification and show not tell

The Little Lost Robot…

When the little discarded Robot  was walking through the forest he heard something that went click, click, click and another click. He was very interested and wanted to know what it was, he got to the place where the sound was coming from then saw that it was a train and so he hopped on it and he fell asleep. When he woke up he heard a loud noise and the train had stopped he hopped off the train and he just about got run over, he was so scared he looked over his shoulder and then he remembered his home the forest so he started walking home and he got there in the end and he never left again...

By Mekeisha Hurley

In this story my GOAL  was to use

personification and to use show not tell and please let me know if i have used these things

We are not wasted space…..

We are not wasted space…..

We all live in a big world and not all of us are seen don’t let the little people be discarded or be put down. Just because we are not big and tall like you doesn't mean that we are not invisible.

You and me are all the same we all live in the same world we have the same God.

The little people that live in our world are not wasted space they were put there for a reason, a simple reason to help and to love others and to spread the word of God. By Mekeisha Hurley

The school

Tree Diagram by Tess and Mekeisha