When you post remember you are posting to a world audience. You must use correct punctuation - sentences must start with capital letters and end with full stops, check your spelling and use writing language not text language. Mrs FR

Sunday, 29 March 2015

Mekeisha and Abigail's Do's and Don't's

Do-stand tall for your self and others.
Don't-bully others.
Do-be kind to people that are older than you.
Don't-talk in church.
Don't-hurt others.
Do-Be good in the public eye.
Do-listen to people that are older than you.
Don't-be silly round little kids.
Don't -disrespect yourself and others.
Do- help everyone even if they aren't your best friend.
Don't- be silly in prayer time and church.
Do- be kind to everyone .
Don't- put yourself or others down.
Don't - think your opinion doesn't matter.
Do- believe in yourself and others.
Do- open doors for people who are older than nice.
Don’t- swear in school
By Abigail and Mekeisha :)

Tuesday, 17 March 2015

using personification and show not tell

The Little Lost Robot…

When the little discarded Robot  was walking through the forest he heard something that went click, click, click and another click. He was very interested and wanted to know what it was, he got to the place where the sound was coming from then saw that it was a train and so he hopped on it and he fell asleep. When he woke up he heard a loud noise and the train had stopped he hopped off the train and he just about got run over, he was so scared he looked over his shoulder and then he remembered his home the forest so he started walking home and he got there in the end and he never left again...

By Mekeisha Hurley

In this story my GOAL  was to use
personification and to use show not tell and please let me know if i have used these things

Sunday, 15 March 2015

We are not wasted space…..

We are not wasted space…..

We all live in a big world and not all of us are seen don’t let the little people be discarded or be put down. Just because we are not big and tall like you doesn't mean that we are not invisible.
You and me are all the same we all live in the same world we have the same God.
The little people that live in our world are not wasted space they were put there for a reason, a simple reason to help and to love others and to spread the word of God. By Mekeisha Hurley