The Little Lost Robot…
When the little discarded Robot was walking through the forest he heard something that went click, click, click and another click. He was very interested and wanted to know what it was, he got to the place where the sound was coming from then saw that it was a train and so he hopped on it and he fell asleep. When he woke up he heard a loud noise and the train had stopped he hopped off the train and he just about got run over, he was so scared he looked over his shoulder and then he remembered his home the forest so he started walking home and he got there in the end and he never left again...
By Mekeisha Hurley
In this story my GOAL was to use
personification and to use show not tell and please let me know if i have used these things
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